- Alliteration: “Fantastic farm” (23). “Obscure operations” (23). “Grotesque gardens” (23).
- Simile: “...a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills.” (23).
- Personification: “... a line of gray cars crawls along an invisible track” (23).
- Hyperbole: “...drift endlessly over” (23). “...gigantic retinas” (23).
- Imagery: “...the ash-men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud..” (23).
Fitzgerald seems to begin most of his chapters with topics that relate more to the overall picture rather than a continuation of the previous chapter. With his uses of hyperbole, somewhat of disturbing similes, and dismal personification, he is able to create a vague and obscure scene that makes the reader wonder what is going on at the beginning of most of his chapters. This ambiguous style of Fitzgerald contributes to the overall theme of his novel, in which people, like Jay Gatsby, chase vague dreams and whimsical hopes that when realized ultimately lead to their demise and destruction. His use of imagery also bolsters the obscurity of the scenes, as in chapter 2, when he describes the desolate and abysmal land between East and West Egg as a “fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens” (23). This discrepant picture portrays the land between the two places as uninhabitable and ultimately uncrossable, which emphasizes the overall idea that it is impossible for Daisy and Gatsby to be together. Fitzgerald uses this style to keep the overarching idea of the novel relevant throughout.
Your selection of quotes that you found within the book show a lot of effort because they are all perfect examples of rhetorical strategies and must have taken a lot of time to find. Your dissection and analysis of the quotes you chose was also very well-done. You discussed your quotes and Fitzgerald's use of rhetorical strategies in depth, too. I loved how you described each rhetorical strategy because the adjectives you used were very accurate as you say "his uses of hyperbole...disturbing similes, and dismal personification." Very well written and analyzed.
ReplyDeleteWhile your dissection of the more specific selections of your rhetorical strategies was impressive and very well written, I was most impressed by how you noticed that his beginning topics related to the overall theme rather than each individual chapter. That was something I had not picked up from the text, but because you drew this to my attention I now have noticed this. Thank you for brining this to my attention.
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